Vessel of stories
fragile time-pressured journey
human drama fused
Paper Boat
26 Wednesday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
26 Wednesday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Vessel of stories
fragile time-pressured journey
human drama fused
Stasia Desiderata 
“vessel of stories” I like that very much,,,,,
Awesome thought!…Beautifully penned haiku!
Life of paper boat
i too liked “vessel of stories “very much.. 🙂
Wow…this is so well thought out..yes, a paper boat is a vessel of lovely stories..
RS:)
Very nice, I especially like the adjective “fragile” and “vessel of stories”.
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Vessel of stories … loved that. Very unique.
Lovely and different take on the prompt! Love the use of ‘fragile’ here!!
What a beautiful metaphor, Hazel. Very unique take on the prompt.
“vessel of stories” of coarse, great phrase. I love the use of their “time pressured journey” as a metaphore for the human condition.
I like this. I makes my see the paper boat made from pages of an old book.
Human drama fused! Hah! Its nice!!
A fragile, but seaworthy vessel!
Paper Boat