Vessel of stories
fragile time-pressured journey
human drama fused
Paper Boat
26 Wednesday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Stasia Desiderata
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26 Wednesday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Vessel of stories
fragile time-pressured journey
human drama fused
“vessel of stories” I like that very much,,,,,
Awesome thought!…Beautifully penned haiku!
Life of paper boat
i too liked “vessel of stories “very much.. 🙂
Wow…this is so well thought out..yes, a paper boat is a vessel of lovely stories..
RS:)
Very nice, I especially like the adjective “fragile” and “vessel of stories”.
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Vessel of stories … loved that. Very unique.
Lovely and different take on the prompt! Love the use of ‘fragile’ here!!
What a beautiful metaphor, Hazel. Very unique take on the prompt.
“vessel of stories” of coarse, great phrase. I love the use of their “time pressured journey” as a metaphore for the human condition.
I like this. I makes my see the paper boat made from pages of an old book.
Human drama fused! Hah! Its nice!!
A fragile, but seaworthy vessel!
Paper Boat