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Crescendoing verse
pedaled pianississimo
for a solo walk
Loneliness
03 Monday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
03 Monday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
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Photo credit: deMiguel
Crescendoing verse
pedaled pianississimo
for a solo walk
Stasia Desiderata 
Lovely contrast here, between the images in the first and last lines, with the middle line acting as an effective (and musical!) transition.
A very unique take on today’s prompt. I like the line “for a solo walk”
Nice word play…I do like the solo walk ~
Music can be the voice of loneliness, for sure. Lovely images.
Lovely sound imagery
nice write liking the use of the musical and the setting of place
Great imagery!
Hank
Amazing haiku 🙂
It sounds as though you enjoy symphonic walks!
A Long Loneliness
Wonderful use of the form to capture the essence of being lonely
Unique!
Nicely done
Wow! What a nice haiku …. al those lovely words you have used to paint the picture of loneliness. Awesome!
lovely set of contrasting imagines!
Wow, a beautiful and unique take on the prompt, almost musical.
Lovely. I too liked the “solo walk,” but didn’t find loneliness in it.
Beautifully written, strong imagery, almost musical.