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Tanks, smoking sorrow
field battered by war genius
will man ever learn?
Battlefield
29 Saturday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Stasia Desiderata
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29 Saturday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Tags
Tanks, smoking sorrow
field battered by war genius
will man ever learn?
Will man ever learn?… very poignant!
A Senryū:
“O Mars! O Aries!
What will quench your thirst?
How much blood? How many tears?”
{~Umr~}
I agree with your take on war, no’one really wins..
So sad, yet true. Tanks, smoking sorrow – great personification!
The unfortunate answer to your question: probably not.
Battlefield
the question really pushes the readers towards contemplation…wonderful haiku..well crafted
Amazing how much you have said here! Although your subject is a sad one, I enjoyed the poem especially ‘smoking sorrow’ and ‘war genius.’ Well done, Hazel.
Thank you Barbara
waste of genius isn’t it!
It is! Glad you spotted that.