Gold feathers ablaze
crackling in a dish of ash
phoenix is reborn
Birth
22 Saturday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
22 Saturday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Gold feathers ablaze
crackling in a dish of ash
phoenix is reborn
Stasia Desiderata 
Wonderful Hazel. I love the ‘crackling in a dish of ash’ Great!
A metamorphosis! Lovely.
The second line is amazing! Ah, that sacred fire bird… I love Mithology.
Well done.
🙂
Awesome!
phoenix is reborn…wonderful imagination…loved it
and thanks for understanding another adding dimension in my haiku…
The rebirth of the phoenix is amazing ~
Lovely and well-described word picture.
I love that you used concrete imagery. . . “craclking in a dish of ash”. . . even when talking about such an ethereal subject.