Gold feathers ablaze
crackling in a dish of ash
phoenix is reborn
Birth
22 Saturday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Stasia Desiderata
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22 Saturday Sep 2012
Posted in Haiku Heights, September 2012 Challenge
Gold feathers ablaze
crackling in a dish of ash
phoenix is reborn
Wonderful Hazel. I love the ‘crackling in a dish of ash’ Great!
A metamorphosis! Lovely.
The second line is amazing! Ah, that sacred fire bird… I love Mithology.
Well done.
🙂
Awesome!
phoenix is reborn…wonderful imagination…loved it
and thanks for understanding another adding dimension in my haiku…
The rebirth of the phoenix is amazing ~
Lovely and well-described word picture.
I love that you used concrete imagery. . . “craclking in a dish of ash”. . . even when talking about such an ethereal subject.