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Heavenly bodies
orbit great celebrations
today, tomorrow
Star falls, shoot a wish
I’ll dream on meteor showers
ensures more chances
It’s so many things
song, path, film, book, show, club, jet
Celebrating life
29 Tuesday May 2012
Posted Sensational Haiku Wednesday
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Heavenly bodies
orbit great celebrations
today, tomorrow
Star falls, shoot a wish
I’ll dream on meteor showers
ensures more chances
It’s so many things
song, path, film, book, show, club, jet
Celebrating life
4joy said:
your set was beautiful….feeling of celebration and optimism….well-done
Renz Bulseco said:
Wish I’d see a shooting star
athena/april said:
it’s a very beautiful short poem.
celebrating life everyday is really fulfilling
cheers
Robi said:
I hope you could make it longer. I’m looking for more.
Cheers! 😀
Hazel said:
Welcome to the world of haiku 😉
Donna said:
I really enjoyed your set of haiku very much. Nice.
Chèvrefeuille said:
This is a wonderful set of haiku which reads as a short story. Thank you for sharing.
Carol said:
lovely haiku ~ well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^ ~ like them all ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
jane said:
nice writing! keep it up. you’re good at it! xx
becca givens said:
I look forward to one day seeing my first shooting star … lovely!!
Shooting Treasures
Franc Ramon said:
Life is indeed something to celebrate as each new day is a new chance and a new opportunity to enjoy and make memories in life.
kai grafia said:
There is always something breathtakingly beautiful about a sky filled with stars. It always makes me want to reach out for them 🙂
Gigi Beleno said:
I always stare at the sky and stars at night! yeah! wishing a falling star will pass-by.
Valli said:
Beautiful set …enjoyed reading it 😉
Earlie said:
Nice lines there…i could give my own interpretations as a physics lover.
It is short but the choice of language makes it vast as the expanse of the universe.
karen said:
i feel good whenever i read a poem. nice haiku.
Airra Pingol said:
Life is precious. Celebrate life and learn how to appreciate 🙂
Kathy Ngo said:
Beautifully written … moving!
Mai Flores said:
Love your composition. Loved it even more as I adore looking and wishing on stars…
Ric / Life N Canvas said:
A simple piece, a beautiful thought, a message to treasure: Celebrate Life!
marri said:
We have to celebrate LIFE
all the time. We have to be grateful
for every morning that comes and
every evening that brings us to the
comforts of our beds. Everyday is
a GIFT from GOD.
Leo said:
hope those wishes come true, and you get to see more such stars, Hazel 🙂